MIDNIGHT Tier

Work With an Editor

You’ve written your manuscript—congrats!

Now it needs a professional editor—someone who knows not just grammar and style, but structure, market, and voice. Someone who will tell you the truth about what’s working and what isn’t, then help you fix it.

Midnight is where the deep work happens. Choose the type of editing your manuscript needs, or let the comparison below point you in the right direction.

Not Sure Which Edit You Need?

The most common question authors ask is: “What type of editing do I actually need?”
Answer these four questions and you’ll know in under a minute.

  • Is your story’s structure, pacing, or plot still in flux?

    If the answer’s Yes → You may need Developmental Editing

  • Is your structure solid but your sentences need polish?

    If the answer’s Yes → Line Editing is your next step

  • Is your manuscript revised and nearly ready to publish?

    If the answer’s Yes → Copyedit + Proofread to finish strong

  • Do you want the full publishing house treatment in one package?

    If the answer’s Yes → The Pro Package is built for you

Let’s Find Your Next Step.

Book a FREE Author Breakthrough Call. You’ll leave with your questions answered and a game plan in hand.

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Developmental Editing

Big-Picture Shaping Before You Polish a Single Sentence

Developmental editing addresses the fundamental architecture of your manuscript: Does the story work? Are the stakes clear? Does the structure support the story you’re trying to tell? This is the edit that transforms a good draft into a book that readers can’t put down.

What We Look at

  • Overall structure and chapter order
  • Pacing—where it drags, where it rushes
  • Character arcs and emotional depth
  • Plot logic, gaps, and unresolved threads
  • Point of view consistency
  • Scene-level tension and stakes
  • Market positioning and genre fit

What You Get

  • Full manuscript read with track changes and margin comments
  • Detailed 20-35 page (depending on length) editorial memo with revision priorities
  • 60-minute call to discuss findings and plan your revision

Price

$0.040/word

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Line Editing

Sentence-Level Clarity That Enhances Your Voice

Line editing is where your prose gets its edge. Working sentence by sentence, we focus on clarity, rhythm, word choice, and flow—making sure every line earns its place and sounds unmistakably like you.

What We Look at

  • Sentence rhythm and variety
  • Word choice and precision
  • Repetitive phrasing and filler
  • Voice consistency throughout
  • Dialogue flow and attribution
  • Paragraph transitions and momentum

What You Get

  • Full manuscript edited in track changes
  • Margin notes explaining significant changes
  • Short editorial summary on voice and style patterns

Price

$0.035/word

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Copyediting

Clean, Consistent, Ready for the World

Copyediting is the technical layer—the edit that catches what revision misses. Grammar, punctuation, consistency, timeline, style. By the time we’re done, your manuscript is clean, cohesive, and ready for final proofing or publication.

What We Look at

  • Grammar and punctuation
    Spelling and capitalization consistency
  • Timeline and continuity errors
  • Character name and detail consistency
  • Style guide adherence (Chicago, AP, or house style; The Chicago Manual of Style is the traditional standard followed by our editors)
  • Repetitive word patterns across chapters

What You Get

  • Full manuscript edited in track changes
  • Margin notes explaining significant changes
  • Style sheet documenting key decisions for consistency
  • Short editorial summary on voice and style patterns

Price

$0.030/word

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Proofreading

The Final Pass Before Your Book Meets the World

Proofreading is the last set of professional eyes before your manuscript goes to a formatter, an agent, or a publisher. This is not revision; it’s a precision sweep for anything that slipped through earlier edits.

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What We Look at

  • Typos and misspellings
  • Punctuation errors
  • Formatting inconsistencies
  • Any remaining continuity or consistency issues

What You Get

  • Full manuscript proofed in track changes
  • Short summary of patterns found

Price

$0.020/word

Proofreading assumes the manuscript has already been copyedited. If it hasn’t, copyediting is recommended first.

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The Pro Package

The Full Publishing House Experience, In One Package

This is the edit your manuscript would receive at a traditional publishing house. Three stages, no shortcuts, no time pressure between rounds.

The Pro Package combines line editing, copyediting, and proofreading into a single seamless process, mirroring exactly how major publishing houses bring a manuscript to market. Each stage builds on the last, and there are no time limits between rounds. Take as long as you need to revise before moving forward.

The Three Stages

  • Stage 1—Collaborative Line Edit: Sentence-level clarity, voice, rhythm, and flow. Includes editorial memo and 60-minute call.
  • Stage 2—Copyedit: Grammar, consistency, style, and technical clean-up after your revisions.
  • Stage 3—Final Proofread: The precision sweep that catches anything that slipped through. Your manuscript, publication-ready.

Pricing Note

Custom quote depends on scope, word count, and any prior editing work.

Add-on:

Power Up Publishing Consult

Available with any Midnight tier service

Your Manuscript Is Getting Edited. Your Publishing Plan Should Be Getting Built.

Editing and publishing strategy don’t have to be separate conversations. Add a 60-minute Power Up Consultation customized to your book and publishing goals and walk away from the editing process with both a polished manuscript and a clear path to publication.

A person reviews an edited manuscript with handwritten notes, using a laptop, notebook, and red pen. Coffee mug and plant nearby on a wooden desk.

What We Cover

  • Overview of publishing paths—traditional, hybrid, small/independent, self-publish
  • Distribution basics and where your book should live
  • Simple launch framework to start thinking about now
  • Clear if/then guidance: if you want an agent, here’s what to consider and how to query; if you want to self-publish, here’s a timeline map, cover design memo, etc.
  • Follow-up with templates, introductions, transcript, and more

Price

$199 as a Midnight add-on

Want to go deeper? The full Moonrise tier covers end-to-end publishing strategy. Consultation cost can be applied toward a Moonrise package.

Add-on:

Metadata Creation or Review

Your Book Could Be Exactly What a Reader Is Searching For. Make Sure They Can Find It.

Metadata is your book’s search engine. Title, subtitle, description, keywords, categories—this is the behind-the-scenes information that determines whether your book shows up on Amazon, in libraries, and on retail sites. A beautifully edited manuscript with poor metadata is an invisible book.

Choose Your Option

  • Metadata Creation: We build your full metadata package from scratch: title strategy, subtitle, book description, keyword research, key selling points, comp titles, BISAC category selection, and much more.
  • Metadata Review: If you already have metadata established, we can audit it, identify gaps, and optimize what you have for better discoverability.

Pricing Note

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Is Midnight Right for You?

You’re in the right place if…

  • You have a complete manuscript and are ready for professional editing
  • You’ve revised as much as you can on your own and need expert eyes
  • You’re preparing to query agents, submit to publishers, or self-publish
  • You want your book to read like it came from a traditional publishing house

Project Policy

Payment

50% to book, 50% at delivery

Rush

+20% if needed; calendar-dependent

Turnaround

Minimum one month for ~70,000 words. Longer for larger or more complex manuscripts.

AI Policy

If substantial AI use is flagged in submitted pages, additional cost may apply. Our standard: Human-led, AI-assisted, author-voice first.

Track Changes

All edits delivered in Track Changes (Word or Google Docs). You accept or reject every change—your manuscript, your decisions.

IP

You own your manuscript and all accepted edits upon full payment.

Confidentiality

All client materials are confidential. NDA available on request.

Communication

Email is primary. Monday–Friday, 9am–4pm Arizona time. Replies within 1–2 business days.

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10 No-Fail Steps Before You Publish

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Ready to Elevate Your Voice?

Every author who works with Midnight Editors leaves with more than a better manuscript. They leave with a real understanding of the industry they’re stepping into—and the confidence to navigate it long after our work together ends.